1. To my grandparents.
In this picture there is a man named Chuck Norris. Chuck Norris is a action actor. He is famous for the show "Walker Texas Ranger." In the picture he is kicking a husky dog. He is using his famous round-house kick to propel the dog backwards. He has used this move many times on his enemies. It has the same result every time, it knocks out the enemy. He is also in the desert.
2. To My Peers.
Chuck Norris was wandering through the desert, when he came upon a sled dog. The dog started to attack Chuck. he instantly ripped off his cloths to reveal his karate suit. This momentarily stunned the dog, which gave Chuck the chance to strike. Chuck Norris round-house kicking this dog in the FACE! He used his powerful leg muscles to tell that dog who is boss! he jumped into the air, spun and planted his foot of steel into the dogs head. His powerful kick propelled the dog backward, sending it into the depths of the outer limits of space.
1 comment:
The first story to your grandparents was a bit dull. I think you should add some interesting words in the description to keep your grandparents interested. It seems like you’re just listing off events which can get boring after a while.
I liked your story to your peers. It was much more interesting. I really liked your word choice for this paragraph, like when you said "sending it into the depths of the outer limits of space".
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